Hello blog readers. Its been a week since I posted last, and I have a lot more to share with you. So far, I have read the first three chapters of my book
Shadow Ball. The novel has surprisingly developed a lot within these fifty-seven pages. So, here are the characters and conflicts, my reaction to the reading, and my predictions for the novel so far.
In the first three chapters, the novel has introduced four main characters. The first of these is Sam Weiss, a first generation American trying to make a living. Secondly, we have Charles Comisky, the owner of the Chicago White Sox. The third character introduced is Rube Foster, the black owner of the Chicago's African American team, the Chicago-American Giants. Finally, John Henry Lloyd, a black former baseball player, who is now a blue collar worker.
The first character mentioned in the novel is Sam Weiss. His father was Max Weiss, who left his family and immigrated to America from Poland to find a better life. He faced many challenges while in America, but especially finding a job. He was conned out of his life savings, and cleaned the streets for the rest of his life to make a living to support his family. Sam, his son, is a very intelligent, hardworking, and determined person. He attended college, and law school in Chicago. While studying for the Bar Exam, he met Charles Comiskey, the owner of the White Sox. Sam wasn't quite finished law school when Comiskey offered him a job as his right hand man. Weiss accepted, without a lot of knowledge of what it would entail.
Throughout the section, Sam Weiss had a few challenges. The earliest mentioned dates back to when he was just a kid playing baseball. He was a very talented ball player, and the best out of his group of friends. However, after an accident at one of their games left his eye severely injured, he needed a six-month recovery. He was never able to play baseball again. Another of his challenges was finding a job after law school. As a Jew, very few law firms would hire him. Also, the ones that were willing to hire him were in fields of law he had no interest in practicing. However, this conflict was resolved when Charles Comiskey offered him a job. The final, and probably the most significant conflict relevant to the novel, is the last mentioned. Sam believes that if the Chicago White Sox acquire John Henry Lloyd, they would be able to win the pennant. The only problem; Lloyd is black. Since the novel takes place in the early 1900's, having an African-American in the major leagues is considered unheard of and outrageous. Sam takes it upon himself to convince Mr. Comiskey to sign Lloyd. The third chapter ends with Weiss at Comiskey's house, the contract for signing John Henry Lloyd to the Chicago White Sox in hand...
Another main character in the story is Charles Comiskey, whose nickname is
The Roman. He is the owner of the Chicago White Sox, one of major league baseball's best teams. He is very cheap with his player's salaries, and is hated by nearly all of them. In fact, almost everyone in the novel who describes him has a deep hatred towards him.
Comiskey has a lot of conflict with his team. Because he is extremely frugal with the money he spends, he doesn't pay his players generously; at all. However, he is very set on having the White Sox win the championship this year. To help with this, he acquired Joe Jackson the previous year, who is described as the "best raw hitter in the league". He has shown to be a large asset to the team, but they still need more to succeed against the competition.
Rube Foster is also an important character in the novel. He is the owner of the Negro League baseball team in Chicago, called the Chicago-American Giants. He has a past relationship with another of the characters, John Henry Lloyd, who used to play for him. So far in the novel, no conflicts have been mentioned concerning him. However, I predict that many will arise as the novel goes on due to racial prejudices of the time period.
The final main character mentioned is John Henry Lloyd. He is an African American blue collar worker. He used to play baseball, and was very talented. When he quit, he became a laborer. One of his conflicts discussed in the novel is his missing of baseball. He still misses it everyday, and longs to play again. However, this problem may have a solution. Sam Weiss' has a plan to get Lloyd signed to the Chicago White Sox would solve this problem. When presented with the idea, Lloyd was elated and extremely doubtful. However, Weiss convinced him he would make it happen. Another of Lloyd's conflicts is with the people he works with. Most of them are white, and this presents a problem. Because of the racial hierarchy during the time, Lloyd is placed near the bottom. He is forced to follow directions from his bosses, who are all white. At one point, one orders him to fetch them some beer. Although he was very upset, he was able to keep his wits about him and comply with the order.
After reading the first three chapters, I am very satisfied with the novel. I think it is very interesting how it reflects a real life event that was very crucial to the advancement of the sport, which was when Jackie Robinson broke the color barrier. The difference is, the setting for this story is about thirty years earlier. I am interested to see if it plays out at all similar to the real life event. The one thing that has surprised me is how the author paints the character of Charlie Comiskey. Every time one of the characters introduced or described him, he was shown in a negative light. Also, one thing I am disapointed with so far is the amount that Rube Foster is characterized. He is not talked about for very long so far, but I think he will become a pivotal character in the story later on.
I have many predictions for how Peter Rutkoff will develop the story. For one, I do not think Charles Comiskey will go for the contract that Sam is about to present to him. Because of the way he has been characterized, he does not seem like the kind of man willing to risk himself for the betterment of a minority. Also, I think that there will be a conflict between Sam Weiss and John Henry Lloyd. Weiss reassured Lloyd that he would be able to sign him to the White Sox, and Lloyd was very excited about this. However, if Comiskey is unwilling to sign the contract, I think Lloyd will be very upset and blame it on Sam.